I am for the first time in my life attempting to write a story (I blame you nat!) and no less then two paragraphs in i've whacked straight into a wall and knocked out my ability to write anything else. So i am asking can people please give me suggestions...
anyway stuff done so far:

Keitou stared blankly at the world infront of her wondering where she should be, she spent most days like this her mind a blank, all she could remember was a immense fear in the back of her mind the sound of shouting and the snow topped mountains of what she believed to be her home. Keitou was a hunter, after she had found herself alone in a strange forest as a child with only that memory to haunt her she had been forced to learn to live for herself.

[6 years previous]

A curious scratching noise entered Keitou's ear, with a surprising amount of effort she slowly opened her eyes her head throbbing, a rabbit was burrowing a den nearby. 'ung....where am i?' she was alone in what appeared to be a small clearing, staring fearfully at the dark forest that surrounded her she got up onto her feet. Her head felt fuzzy and she struggled to keep her balance as she slowly made her way down hill hoping to find someone who could help her. The more she walked the more it dawned on the child that she was lost and alone, panic built up in her mind 'what if i never get out of here?' she thought tears welling up in her eyes.